Hey ya’ll, last time we talked about the advantages of
fantasy, so this time we’re talking about the DISADVANTAGES. This can be a bit
more obvious than the pros category, because when it is bad usually it is BAD.
So what is it that separates good fantasy from bad fantasy? I posit it is the
mythical creature known as AUDIENCE RELEVANCE.
Alright, picture a bad fantasy story; it’s not hard, with a
genre as popular as fantasy the sheer amount of stories out there guarantees
that you’re going to have to dig through some schlock to get to the good stuff.
So what are you picturing? Some chosen one sword-wielding knight with a wizard
and hot babe clinging to his feet a la Frank Frazetta painting? Do they have
ridiculous names like Shmendrick the Wisened? Do they have any discernable
character traits outside of handsome dude on a quest to save THE WORLD? No?
This, my friends, is the problem.
You see, one of the best parts of fantasy is the world-building.
You can come up with ANYTHING and as an author you can make it so. But with
great power comes great responsibility; sometimes authors get too caught up in
their own worlds, which in turn leads too: THE ERAGON EFFECT. This is when a
story gets so damn caught up in its’ own universe that before you know it they
are ranting about some ancient war with no relevance to the plot that the
audience has no reason to care about and, what’s more, likely cannot relate
too. Have you, personally, ever been a wizard? Known any wizards? No? Kind of
makes it hard to give a shit about Margo the Great of the seventeenth order of
the Melkors who once fought against Dagbad the Dark right?
The thing about Fantasy is that like any other story we
stick around for the CHARACTERS and PLOT; yes we read it because wizards are
AWESOME but having a wizard without a personality or character is like a
filmmaker going around filming some random joe without letting us know anything
about him, save maybe an extensive history lesson on his ancestors. We don’t
care about him just because he is a wizard, we care because he is a wizard we
personally can relate to. Game of Thrones works because Daenerys has to
overcome her oppressive family and rise up from being the little guy to defeat
the injustices of her world, not because she is the princess of the ancient
Targaryen line who ruled for 300 years in the land region known as Westeros.
And that’s the danger of fantasy; because dragons and magic
are so far removed from our daily lives, authors have to be careful to make
sure that their stories still relate to us personally, and don’t devolve into
obscure history lessons we can in no way connect to. When done right it works
wonders (Re: J.K. Rowling, all of the money), but lose sight of the relateability
of the core story and you may have just entered into the DANGER ZONE.
TRUE DAT.
ReplyDeleteBut really though, as someone who has built their young writing life on world building (I swear I need an intervention), it's a good reminder to build up characters even more.